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~~Okay, here's the finished piece! Not really sure what to say about it, but for those of you who know the book "Tithe" I just wanted to draw a candid moment...that kinda' thing. I thought maybe at the end of the day, poor Roiben would be stressed and knowing Kaye she'd try to cheer him up...Eh...

And Yeah, I know Kaye is supposed to have wings. Didn't feel like drawing them, so pretend she's hiding them with her glamour. Easy.

And you know, it always annoyed me how in other fanart people seem to forget the little teeny tiny fact that Kaye is asian...Hmmmm.....

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:iconcdb-art:
The hair looks alot better shaded, maybe add a couple strands of shadow to push it a bit further. Also, the shadows under and around her arm bracelet things might be to dark, right now they are among the darkest shadows in the pic. Keep goin strong hon its turnin out great :D
:iconrath-roiben-rye:
~~Hmm...What do you think now?? I may edit it a bit still... ^_^
:iconcdb-art:
Im bad at explaining things so I took your image and did a quick paintover of it to show some corrections I would recommend, its in my scrap folder here on DA. Hopefully you dont mind, but Ive had people do this for me and its helped me alot. Other than my recommendations everything else looks really good and the color choices are great :D Also, the expressions are great as usual :D
:iconrath-roiben-rye:
~~ :hug: Thanks hon! And no, I don't mind, but I'm lazy right now...just finished another chibi and I think I'm going to bed... :)
:iconcdb-art:
Fine go to bed, but you'd better get enough sleep for the both of us :cuddle:
:iconrath-roiben-rye:
~~Kay, have fun today! Be safe! :kiss:
:iconcdb-art:
I'll do my best :D And enjoy transformers, hopefully its good enough that you wouldn't mind goin to see it again with me
:iconrath-roiben-rye:
~~From what I've heard I doubt I'll mind! ^_^ :hug:
:iconhira--akami:
Looks really good. You've got a good sense of scene here. I always imagined Kaye being a little lighter green than that, but that's just my opinion.
The only thing I'd change are the angles of the faces. I feel like Roiben should be looking down a little more, as should Kay. Right now their gazes kind of don't meet. *shrugs* not a big thing, though.

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:iconjetstreak:
This looks AMAZING!!! Greak work.

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-Success is often a wrong step in the right direction - Unknown.

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